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  1. "On the day Agnes died…" Is this Nadia? The name threw me for a loop when I thought another character was being introduced.

    I like it though!

    Alli

  2. I was going to make the same comment as Alli….

    I also enjoyed it! I don’t know that I could have done that. I tend to ramble on and never get to the point. Great job!!!

    Megan

  3. Ah, those ARE a lot of constraints!

    AND having to name the characters in meaningful ways…. could set me off into the looney bin.

    I ALREADY have a hard time naming in my stories….

    But it’s true, writing to parameters DOES make you stretch. Paramiters? Paramaters?

    Specific requirements! There!

    Hope you get a good grade.

  4. Very nice. Well done. I like the name Nadia. My bf’s father died of Leukemia. Some rare form not discovered until it was much too late to do anything about.

    Best of luck with your writing class!

  5. I too liked it, however it does not "feel" you are writing this.

    I love your usual style…long, rambling and stops along the way about all the little interesting facts you normally *ramble* about.I love it when you stop us readers in mid sentence to smell the roses.

    I was left feeling *I want more*. Does that make sense? Sort of got the bread without the filling.

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